The writing of the game was very strong and kept me hooked trying to find clues to the mystery. There was lots of depth on each page that filled out the world you were placed in. I think there were great details that hinted to the answer and this led me to being able to guess correctly on my first try. A quality of life thing I might suggest is perhaps changing the page if you have already interviewed that person. It might be possible for someone to get stuck trying to find the last person to interview. The game could suggest different options to interview people based on who they've talked to already, especially if they've talked to them more than once. This would all help making the immersion as the detective even deeper.