yeah, legit needed to digest the story because it was so dramatic haha. sorry to have kept you waiting! i wanted to play your game sooner, along with playing all the other jam entries, but sadly stuff came up and i don't think i'll be able to do it in time :( at least i'm glad to have played this one!
i don't recall exactly what those parts where, but if i remember correctly after you escape evaness there's text that explains how you got out and reached the mayor's mansion. and there also was a moment where you're at the police station, there's a fade to black and it explains that the characters investigated the mayor's mansion, and you're back again at the police station. just struck me as odd cause it made it look like nothing had actually happened.
i thought the mayor did it! seemed suspicious how people talked about him but he rarely ever appeared in person, and his name showing up in the dream solidified that theory haha. it was really shocking to find out it was evaness! legit didn't think she was suspicious for a single second lol.