The censor beeps caught me off guard, and they were funny pretty much every time they were used. Some of the music choices were also quite nice.
The apartment building scene gave me slight Hotel Dusk/Last Window vibes, which is always a good thing.
thank you!🖤 Maybe i should remove the bars since it's the only thing everybody notices lol
No you should keep them! I think they help sell the humor of it. The "It's only 9:00 AM" bit was elevated by it.
i know, but didnt i overdo with the comedy elements? It's a sad story after all...
It wasn't overdone, especially since the comedy disappears as the story goes on and gets more serious.
great, it's waht i intended☺ thank again for feedback<3
