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The basic idea behind this game was really nice. However, having a bogeyman scream in your face every time you open a door turned me down.Viewing post in Maybe it's just a dream comments
To me, life is a learning curve. Sometimes we get it right, right off the bat. Sometimes we make 'mistakes' [and we all make them, myself included], but as long as we learn from them, we make personal and spiritual progress.
Like I said, I really like the basic concept of your game's story, but keep in mind, sometimes less turns out to be more :o]