Just finished it, and I have to say great job! The dialogue was super good, natural, and had a really nice flow to it. I like the characters a lot to, I would really like to get to know them better though. Like what is Amy's job or what does Chloe do for money. I also would really like to see these two in a date scene at a store or arcade or something, it would lend itself some great dialogue. The art is freaking incredible btw, shoutout to the artist. I saw you have ideas for a sequel, I can't wait to see where these two characters go