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great writing and art direction
ohh that was beautiful. mygod Seleos is so hot though. I keep staring at him. Also, the way you characterized Seleos really made him feel like a deity/god, with how at every single turn of conversation,
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you have to stay vigilant and not be lulled to doing what he wants (which was validated by all the existing bad ends when you tried taking the easy way out).
At first, I thought this was your regular romance VN, so I was putting a lot of trust in him despite making the indecisive choices (I initially just wanted MC to make the best possible wish), and yet at the back of my head, my mind was mulling over little red flags such as, 'why was he specifically targeting desperate people on their last shred of hope?' and then the ending answered that wonderfully.
HE'S SO HOT THO! 10/10 would have freed him if only he wouldn't leave me behind.
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How I wish there's more. you really created a good world here and Kore is so levelheaded I wanted to see more of her.