i love tiny details!! it's one of the things i like the most about games, and when i notice them it really says a lot about how much effort and thought the creator(s) put. while i obviously couldn't focus on everything, every small thing added up and created a super effective game feel :> and ooh, i didn't know you had so many unique sources of inspiration, that's so cool!
for what it's worth, while i did find misspelllings sometimes, stuff like that tends not to bother me and i don't think they detracted from the game or the diary entries. but yeah english can be friggin' hard haha. i think you did a good job in making allan and enice sound different from each other tho!
and oh GANA stands for that, i see! fictional countries are always fun haha. can't wait to see what you've got in store for it! :D