No I'm sorry but I talked it over with other members of the community and while I'm sure your entry has merit I can't allow a visual novel without any attempt to look retro to be an entry. In future HPS1 jams I will also be adding a rule about submitting to a maximum of 2 other jams.
I like the weird faceless god idea, I really do but we have to do some level of curation otherwise it would be unfair to all the people who put in so much time just for this jam in particular, I hope you can understand.