This is a great freshman game! Did you do the art for it? I really love the vibes of the line work.
Visually there's a lot to love here but the green behind the titling and font choice there don't pop quite right to me.
The mechanics feel very forgiving, but the tone seems to be power fantasy so that checks.
I'd give a line or two for how the GM uses the tables and any principles of play for them on the sheet, but that's my only strong feedback for your 1st time out.