This is an interesting soundtrack. Overall, I think I can hear a lot (if not all) of the references you used for it. I'd love to mention some stuff that stood out to me the most, though. Out of Town, for example, has moments where the strings sound really loud, and should be toned down, same with Sheepville! and its flute, and More Unnecessary Tension and the impact hits, and the mixing overall on Fight Yourself. At points in the OST it really sounds like you tried to keep the main essence of the original songs you were referencing but took a bit too much of the original - stuff like Hellen's Hello! sounds structurally the same, like background notes and chord movements, as Fallen Down, from Undertale, and Sheepville! and Best Of Friends having the same issue with Temmie Village, from the same game. It's neat to be inspired by other artists, but it's flying a bit too close to the sun for comfort. Fav. track: Elevator Bop
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Thank you for the feedback! I'll be sure to keep in mind the stuff you mentioned such as the mixing and volume of certain instruments and tracks. As for taking too much of the original, I'll try to be more creative and unique with my tracks in the future! I really enjoyed the music of Undertale and wanted to have more or less the same feeling, but looking back at the tracks now it definitely is too close to the originals and I'll be sure to be more original next time. Again, thanks for the feedback and have a good day :D