The ironic part is that i am not a gojo fan, yet i was eating this up while savoring every bit of it. I think you made me like him ToT.
Amazing job as always btw, ty for the hard work
ALSO when i first read the name i thought it was gonna be gojo teaching us. Oh how I smiled when I saw it was the other way arround!!!!
This is the best compliment ever!!! Is there something specific you liked about how I wrote him? I'm super curious now hahhaha
I'm glad you liked the twist with the roles, too! At first, I just thought it would be fun to have Gojo as the one being taught, but now with the full story done, I see that it couldn't have been any other way. Some things just feel like destiny haha thank you for your sweet comment! <3
Ahhhh i was camping and couldn't reply at the time, but basically:
Part of the reason isn't so much about Gojo, but more about how mc handles his arrogance. Also how she is almost as proud herself, yet doesn't show arrogance.
I also like his povs, its nice to get an insight on how he feels.
Now about him, I really like the way you did the pipeline between "this is a game to him. He probably believes there's nothing you can teach him" to respect and onwards, even going as "far" as thanking mc for teaching him.
The part where mc is explaining teleportation and asks for permission to touch him and he immediately goes "yes" and that by the end of the demo there's enough trust to just flick his forehead is a progress I enjoy.
Ah, and how he kinda stops being as arrogant as on the beginning, by the end of the demo is more like a friendly cockyness that somehow fits well w him fishing compliments from mc (Ok hes still arrogant, but it's softer)
Also how his sprite has his head hung high, it fits him. Also I really like his '^' sprite a lot!!
And lastly, this is more of an error, though its not too bad. If you click on "load" while playing and then press "esc" (without loading anything) to go back to the game, his sprite disappears.
And that's all. overall i like it a lot so far
I love detailed feedback so much, thank you for sharing! :') Writing relationships that progress over time is one of my favorite things to do. I'm glad it worked nicely in the demo (hopefully it worked in the full game as well)
Regarding the error, unfortunately, I had to put a warning about the sprite going missing when hitting ESC since I haven't been able to solve it myself. I need to contact the plug-in creator to see if they can help, but I haven't had the time yet. I'll do it soon!
