What a marvelous VN this is~ All of the characters are so vibrant and thoughtfully written, each with their own distinct energy and portrait art—and my, you do such an excellent job at developing them all through their words, expressions, and actions alike~
The twists and turns in the plot kept me on my toes; I never quite knew where the narrative was going to go next, and I absolutely love that in a story (when executed as well as you've done here, that is, heheh). For that matter, the action / battle sequences were quite nicely done, too~
And the music! The background music itself is fantastic, working wonders to add depth to the VN; and you've shown good judgment on when and where to use music versus having none at all, heheheh.
Superb work, well and truly~ I'm itching to see where this story goes from here!