Oh man, this was so sweet and sad and aghhhh. First off, the art is amazing, I love your style and the character designs, the softness of the colors and everything looks so good.
Kyp and Nin's relationship is so good too. There's a lot of pain and regressing but that's how it goes, and it hurt quite a bit to read at some points, but that's what made it so worth it :D You did a really good job, I wish there could be more of these two...