Mesprit is misspelled. I don't know if it's just in the sex scene, but you have it spelled as Mespirit when it's spelled "Mesprit," there is only one "i."
You know, this whole time I though it was MeSPIRIT!
I'd better go change that!
I struggled with Mesprit's name for the longest time as well, so it's understandable. Keep up the great work I love this a lot!
