Firstly the things i loved:
- The creepy version of mr. sandman is great!
- I loved the art and the screen distortion effects.
There were some things that bugged me however:
- The text wasn't easily readable at the start (because white and light red doesn't contrast that well)
- The text was way to big for an enjoyable reading experience.
- It was really distracting that the name of the characters always got written letter by letter.
Hope this feedback helps you out :)