This ideation document provides an succinct overview of the idea behind this game. Readers can intuit that this game is a platformer, and the hand-drawn levels are helpful in envisioning the game's direction. This idea is unique, and is an interesting take on this year's theme.
One note is that this document does not provide a clear plan for production, and how the developer will work to accomplish all of the tasks involved. I would encourage the developer to remain mindful of scope throughout the process, to make sure that the game can be completed in a timely manner.
Wishing you the best as we move forward!