OMG, the storytelling is sick! And the artwork, it's gorgeooousss!!! >=-D
Had a bit trouble reading tho, the language is messy but nothing dramatic. Speaking of a mess, the first mini game IS GARBAGE!!! Had to wait, like, 99999 hours to kill that damn witch-bitch. }=-L Seriously, that click-and-wait-thing needs an entire rework (along with English) to be done
MUSIC IS GOOD TOO THO!!! And I kinda loved the silliness of the situations (which for me personally is already an achievement)
I'd give the game solid 8/10, GREAT JOOOOB!!!