very good, very steamy in a way I wasn't prepped for, would adore to see this in further development and hope that it has the features I generally like, as most is unknown, but even then, so steamy I might stay anyway
(sidenote; you seem like you're neurodivergent, this isn't an insult, not even sure why I'm pointing it out, but I can feel it in your writing style, and love it)
Also I recommend a ~♡ instead of a ♡ alone, it's also good to seperate and dull down certain parts so the deeper parts feel more impactful so sometimes just one or the other. This is just writer to writer tho, feel free to ignore my ideas they are mine not yours~♡
(Pardon the edit I had to post from PC but switch to mobile cause the lil heart isnt an option)