The voice acting was honestly super good. It was comforting but at the same time, you could feel a distance in his voice. One from caring but also not knowing how to do it except the awkwardness doesn't just show up in voice, as if he has tried hard to make sure it doesn't come off that way (or is just like that because he's a memory).
I love the texture of the art too. Something about there being no eyes but just a mouth, just a silhouette of a man you once loved. I look forward to more projects!
Edit: I also wanted to commend you for choosing all the right things for this, it felt really nice.
Also wanted to add that I couldn't access that poem so that's a shame. [It wouldn't load, which was uploaded in just 1 site]