You can tell the VN was made with love and passion and is telling a story that is dear to its creator. There is a lot of emotional earnestness in the VN and the CGs were very nice.
Unfortunately, I must admit that, if I take the VN at face value, as trying to tell a heartfelt story, it didn't really work for me. Not only you have the classic problem of "too much telling, not enough showing", but it seemed like the main way for the VN to get its point across was having the characters scream at each other's faces how much THEY FUCKING MATTERED TO EACH OTHER. This intensity did not feel earned and didn't really help me to uderstand these characters or their relationships on an emotional level.
Having said that, I had a blast reading this VN on a more ironic level. Both thanks to accidental but hilarious mistake that led most instances of "right" and "left" to be replaced by "centerright" and "centerleft", but also thanks to the unintentionally funny tone some scenes ended up having (due to the excessive Spanish soap opera drama quality). I'm not trying to be mocking when I say I had a lot of fun with it, even if I'm guessing this was not the author's intention!
(This is my brutally honest IMHO feedback, again not trying to be mean to the creators!)