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TheModernDeath7 years ago (1 edit)

I covered your game on my channel! I liked it a lot. Do have some criticism.

EDIT: My criticism more so goes for if you want to remake this or if you want to do a sequel. I understand that this is a quick little thing you made. :D

-The voice acting needs to be louder

-You don't really need the particle effects. Instead use Level design to make it easier to navigate the space.

-When the lights in the house go off, use the colors blue, dark grey, and purple to give the illusion of darkness. That way I don't get horribly lost.

Otherwise I think this is really cool. If you make any new games, I'd love to cover it on my channel.

Here is the video if you want to watch the rest of what I have to say:



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Arron Burch7 years ago

Thank you so much for taking the time to review my game! Honestly I can't believe the feedback I'm getting from this it's amazing, I understand there are going to be critiques and that's completely fine! I agree with what you said 100% although there are a few things I'd like to make obvious, everything in this project is completely original hence the not so great sounds/voice acting, as for this project we were not allowed to use any third party assets! Also the particle effects are there to indicate a clear path through the interactions for marking purposes 😊 I agree they don't need to be there if level design was more thought out! I hate to make excuses so I hope it doesn't come across that way! I just wanted to explain the reason behind the not so brilliant things! I do want to say thank you though as I understand the time that does into creating these videos and I hope that you follow my progress as a fellow developer!

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