This is a great first game! I love how you took the time to craft an engaging story in the game's intro. Here are a few tips to improve the game.

• Consider updating the game's page. One aspect of game development is creating a page that encourages players to want to try your game. Adding a cover image, description, and screenshots can go a long way.
• There doesn't seem to be audio. I'm not sure if that was intentional, but adding audio can be a great way to enhance immersion.
• The color contrast between the text and background could be slightly improved. There are tools online to help you test the contrast between text and background colors that you should consider checking out online.

Overall, great job!