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Write 30 - Mini Jam Lightning Round Entry's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall Creativity | #1 | 4.273 | 4.273 |
| Writing Quality | #1 | 4.455 | 4.455 |
| Incorporation of the Theme Limit | #5 | 3.727 | 3.727 |
Ranked from 11 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Word Count
30
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The rhyme connects without constraining. The images are so clean that I forget I’m reading. Your symmetry awakens a deadly sympathy, and I’m left floundering.
This poem makes me think of two things:
1. A dark, somber experience about the end of a man's life.
2. A bullet that can kill the past? EEEEEEEEEEEENTER THE GUNGEON!
Either way, great entry.