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A jam submission

Write 30 - Mini Jam Lightning Round EntryView project page

You don't have to let every loss beat you twice.
Submitted by Thighs — 8 days, 12 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Overall Creativity#14.2734.273
Writing Quality#14.4554.455
Incorporation of the Theme Limit#53.7273.727

Ranked from 11 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Word Count
30

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HostSubmitted(+1)

The rhyme connects without constraining. The images are so clean that I forget I’m reading. Your symmetry awakens a deadly sympathy, and I’m left floundering.

Submitted

This poem makes me think of two things:


1. A dark, somber experience about the end of a man's life.


2. A bullet that can kill the past? EEEEEEEEEEEENTER THE GUNGEON!


Either way, great entry.