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A jam submission

The Legacy of the PaupersView game page

Visual Novel
Submitted by ChilliTech — 11 hours, 40 minutes before the deadline

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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Simplicity#303.2664.000
Fun#342.4493.000
Topic#382.0412.500
WOWIE!#392.1772.667
Sound#401.7692.167
Visuals#412.0412.500
Creativity#432.3132.833

Ranked from 6 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

HostSubmitted (1 edit) (+1)

The beginning of the story was quite intriguing. You often managed to give me quite a cool illusion of choice (which shop to go into for example).

After a while it starts feeling very linear. I didn't feel any kind of long term impact of my actions and at that point the story by itself is not quite enough to carry me through the experience. 

Why do these people bully me after I came back from the death? Why does nobody try to help me? Why do I not try to find out who I am or where I live? Maybe there are good reasons for all of that, but it is not addressed properly and was therefor a bit of an immersion breaker for me.

I wanted to know how it continues, though, and I played it all the way through the demo. I'll give you that. :D

Hope that feedback helps you out.

Submitted(+1)

I think it would have been more creative if the words itself interact with each other. It wasn't very clear how the conversations interact with each other. There were also a couple of spelling errors.