Some formatting changes would make this a lot more usable at the table. Using tables instead of bullet points will allow you to better differentiate and organize information so it's readable at a glance. I figure you used the bullet points for space purposes, but there were a few places where the language could be tightened up to create the space for you. Such as, you don't need to say, "this is a standard kitchen." A GM will presume that. You want to provide details the GM wouldn't assume, succinctly for ease of use at the table. "Signs of struggle. Knife missing. Stocked, but rotting food." From there, you can flavor boost it.
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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Inspiration: Effective use of assigned "Weird Tales" cover elements. | #20 | 3.917 | 3.917 |
Overall | #27 | 3.750 | 3.750 |
Vibes: Overall atmosphere and feel of the supplement. | #28 | 3.833 | 3.833 |
Usability: Practicality and playability at the game table. | #36 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
Ranked from 12 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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