This track has a haunting quality to it, as if we are in a really shady casino or speak-easy back room type of poker game. When I listen to this track, I imagine that this could maybe be a theme in a game when you are losing a lot of money or have gone bankrupt. I think the minor harmony is really unique and I like the despairing emotional undertones it sets.

Constructive feedback: The main melody sound has a high piercing quality that sometimes overpowers the other tracks and I think it could stand to be reduced in volume a bit to blend with the accompaniment. I also think there might be some opportunities to play a countermelody, in particular at the repeat of the A section, to add some contrasting lines that add some momentum and melodic interest to reduce a little of the repetition.

Overall this track conveys a lot of emotion and sets a dark scene very well. Nice work and thank you for sharing!

Heyah! So will list couple of points:

1) I like the melody sound choice :) i think it works great, tho, i think it could ramp up a bit in the middle. I would say the song gets a bit boring after that part because it loops and in not very interesting way 

Also, the melody could use a little volume down

2) as mentioned above, the song doesnt really chane much, for the lenght its given. You could add some changing chorda, make the percussion do a different pattern, make the bass do some different pattern etc.

Even add some new instrument :D

Its a good submission, but could use a lot of work