Amateur or ProCertainly amateur.
Do you want to be judged by our jury?Sure.
Fun, and I liked the interactive/exploration elements for a twine game.
Noticed a couple errors: "But you opponent is the void for now." I think "you" should be "your" here"It's parting gift a hole where you sit."I think "It's" should be "Its" here, and you were just running so it is a little jarring that you are suddenly sitting. Maybe you meant to say stand?
Overall I thought it was crisp, short, and thought provoking.
Really short game, wish there was a bit more in this, but good entry! I included it in part 5 of my WAG Challenge compilation video series, if you'd like to take a look :) https://youtu.be/OTUN_NdAHfU
This was...lacking. I wish some backstory on the void or the character i'm playing as was at the beginning, instead of the game throwing the void at you with no buildup. I thought this would be because the backstory and detail would be revealed in the void, but that's not what happened. The game becomes "do this or do that", which is fine-- if done well. However, because the story didn't do much to get me interested, the story isn't very interesting, and this became a very lacking experience.
I did the WAG challenge too, by the way. My game is Literate, and you can give it a look at http://itch.io/jam/wag-challenge/rate/29610
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