Here is a reminder about this game. Could not read the last sign. BEST ENDING EVER! Thanks for making. :)
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surprising depth with leveling up
simple aesthetic but clear what you need to do
sound is functional but a bit annoying, no music, bad audio balance
good technical achievement
what would it be like if you worked with a team?
Some minor mechanical complaints, but great job for one person
battles are your choices
recreated final fantasy battle system
instant actions can be jarring
no borders on UI make it hard to tell what is going on
good music choice
Congrats on a complete game! The gameplay felt fine and even though it was a wall of text and some parts were contrived the story was pretty good for a short game. Good humor in the humorous parts. Lots of places to explore may have meant lots of frustration for players, but the secret ending felt rewarding.
Fun, and I liked the interactive/exploration elements for a twine game.
Noticed a couple errors:
"But you opponent is the void for now."
I think "you" should be "your" here
"It's parting gift a hole where you sit."
I think "It's" should be "Its" here, and you were just running so it is a little jarring that you are suddenly sitting. Maybe you meant to say stand?
Overall I thought it was crisp, short, and thought provoking.