Really interesting start of a game... I included it in part 6 of my WAG Challenge compilation video series, if you'd like to take a look :) https://youtu.be/swbuTc6rufA

An interesting story with really detailed world-building. A shame it's not playable in a game - have you thought of putting it into Twine? It should be a good fit as it can do lots of text and branching choices.

I regret to inform you this is not a game. Games require some form of interactivity, and all you have here is a story and a picture. This isn't a game at all. I sincerely hope you're not trolling, because if you are, I don't quite see the point.

I look forward winning this contest and working with the company.