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I Am A Pencil (Aku Sebatang Pensel)'s itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Creativity | #14 | 2.475 | 3.500 |
| Use of Theme | #17 | 1.945 | 2.750 |
| Overall Enjoyment | #19 | 1.945 | 2.750 |
| Gameplay | #19 | 1.414 | 2.000 |
| Overall | #19 | 1.738 | 2.458 |
| Visuals | #20 | 1.768 | 2.500 |
| Audio | #21 | 0.884 | 1.250 |
Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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i didn't a understand a thing to be honest i don't see the theme though but the story is very long lol but i do think its the game plan for a story i just didn't understand what to do lol
Thank you for trying it anyway! Appreciate that a lot.
Interesting game, ilike that there is a go back option at all times. I must say some parts of the story are weird, principally with how the pencil describes itself and the marriage thing.
Other than that, good job.
Thank you for playing this one also! There is only one ending to this story but I still wanted to add branching narrative to help describe the world and give the characters more back story, I'm glad you liked that there's an option to go back each time.
And yes it's a bit of a weird, surreal narrative for sure!
Nice game but I was a little confused at what to do in the beginning. Some kind of indicator would ahve been nice. I was also confused at the marriage topic coming from the pencil, maybe I was supposed to read something else or I just forgot how it got introduced.
Thanks for the feedback! I'll definitely consider putting instructions at the beginning for folks who've not used Twine before.
The writing is a little surreal :)