This story have many choice! And using many color for text is great!

Character was the best part of this game! I'm glad I'm in this game!

Also, color of the text is very good to understand the character's dialogue. The background was very similar so I could understand well.

Brilliant work!

It is fun for me to play this game, because there are many choices.

The use of color in this story was great. I also noticed that all of the people that we meet are students from this class. The story was grounded in our reality as Meiji University staff and students, so I’m sure that many other students will recognise the places you mentioned. The use of Meidai tea was hilarious, as were the sour sweets..!

This was a cute entry. I don't usually like zombies, but this had a fun twist to it. The fetch-like quest was simple but entertaining and all items available unlocked a piece. It was also nice to see the different characters get a specific colour when they talked (though it would have been nice if the main character also had one too :P). There were a few comical moments during the story that I appreciated a lot (the sour candy stunning the zombie xD).
The text may have needed a bit of a grammar check, but this didn't detract me from the story at all.

Good job on your first Twine game!