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A jam entry

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Submitted by delightfuldeer with 11 hours, 6 minutes before the deadline

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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw score
Fun#15.0005.000
Overall#15.0005.000
Healthiness#15.0005.000
Sound#15.0005.000
Theme#15.0005.000
Art#15.0005.000
Overall#15.0005.000

Ranked from 1 rating. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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(+1)

Congratulations on your first game! Really interesting game and story! Your characters were really well developed and their personalities really showed through their dialogue. 

Here are some tips for next time you make a narrative game or do a game jam:

Create some more branches in your narrative, the more choices you have the more the player is engaged in the story. It also makes them feel like their choices matter (even if they don't ;)  )

Team up with people who can make original artwork for your project, even if they aren't as good. Original content is always better when jamming. Working with others also helps create a better tested game, giving feedback on each others work. 

Developer(+1)

Hey Ben! Thank you so much for your feedback! I am definitely going to look into expanding on choices and original content in the future. For now, though, I wanted an extremely simple content set to work on and debug. :) I really appreciate your kind words!