This is a really fun and creative idea for a game. You have a lively and often very funny prose style. I liked Beverlee the bee ghost in particular! The stories were engaging and it all wrapped up to a heartwarming ending. But if you don't have an artist to work with, you should just release it as a Twine with no graphics--these graphics are going to turn off a lot of people from playing your game.

Neat concept, and fun game. The script has a great sense of humor and there are some wholesome bits too. The speech sfx complimented the ghosts' personalities well. Nice job.