I liked the sprites and backgrounds in the game! However, the humor wasn't quite my speed and I felt like I had no say in the romance route that I went down which felt odd for a visual novel. In some regard, I'm not even sure if I finished the game? Since I was kicked back out to the main menu and the story seemed to restart without much change. 

I think you've got a good base, but I'd recommend giving the player more agency in how the story shapes. Additionally, I recommend going through and syncing up the writing style. Having a statement with a nameplate one sentence and then an "x says,...." the next is a bit jarring. 

Keep up the good work!