Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

• You have created a very creative visual novel! It's very impressive how much text you were able to write in such a short time! It shows that you have a lot of imagination. We've never seen a VN where you can choose paths without ending the story, so we found that very interesting. Very good job :) The theme is very interesting. The way you can discover all the dream worlds gives the game a very exploratory feel. We found the number of words for each portal very appropriate, just enough to get an idea of each world. The achievements are very good, they make you want to try each branch. The game is overall easy and satisfying to navigate. A dreamier design (like blue or purple colors or clouds or fog) could help immerse the player deeper into the dream world. Perhaps a few sounds could be incorporated here and there (such as birds chirping in the forest or the portals making noises). All in all, very good work. Thank you very much for your submission!