First of all I loved the presentation. It was probably the highlight of the game. Although the majority of drawings were unfinished they still were oozing with care and charm.  The moody  intro cut scene was enough to pull me in.  I like the main character, they're adorable and even though most cut scenes are unfinished they're still fun to watch and as much effort as this game has in it, I feel like there was a little too much work put into it if that makes sense. I felt like some of the work was put into the wrong place, like all the different  kinds of  scrap you can get, all the different items, and all of the moves.  I didn't use the majority of them. I'd gotten some of the optional scrap and invested most of my money into increasing my damage and I'd gotten most moves from those machines. Which made every enemy pretty easy. I scaled up in damage very quickly and I didn't really have any reason to invest into any other items that would increase my attributes. I think the gun is kind of cool and I like how shooting the enemy gives you an advantage in the battle. Other than that I did run into a few bugs. When first meeting The Woman in the beginning she asked me to open the door but I just talked to her again and was able to progress without ever knowing, and the work pass you're given is tagged consumable so I was able to f**cking eat it. Not sure if that was intentional lol.  And I know it was addressed but the final boss got her sh*t rocked with one move. 

Despite it's minor flaws I think this has a great custom tileset, great custom sprite sheets, great custom art and great custom sh*t I didn't even know you can customize in RPGmaker. For one the custom battle graphics. It all looks great. You did good with this game keep it up.