Rage game in the middle of narrative experience was a bit jarring, but I got through it! I liked the character designs & progression. I really admire anyone telling a complete story in the context of a jam game. I think some checkpoints & visual consistency would go a long way. 

I like the concept of having these mini games you play that are different from one another to get through different areas. The characters look cool!

In the maze you might consider having more texture to find your way a bit easier. And for the falling part, you might consider more frequent checkpoints as you increase the difficulty. I lost at the very end and was surprised I had to start from the beginning!

Good twist in the story at the end! I was hoping for a congratulations screen, however 🥲