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A jam submission

The Birth Of AJ.View game page

Play as Bright Mac as he collects apples for his pregnant wife.
Submitted by AxalKay — 7 hours, 31 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Gameplay#142.0002.000
Creativity#261.6671.667
Overall#271.5561.556
Pregnancy Content#281.0001.000

Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

  • A good attempt at starting a platformer. Encountered a few bugs that ended up hard locking my game. Continue to work on this project and I'm sure things will turn out great!
  • Pregnancy content: There is none, I think? I am pretty sure there is none. Gameplay: I didn't expect a velocity mechanic in a game, but it doesn't feel very good here, with the walking speed being way too slow and the speed up taking a while too. Other than that, it's a fairly basic platformer. Also, the hitbox for the apples seems to be a lot smaller than their sprite. Creativity: Uh... It's a collectathon platformer. That's not a bad thing, but that's as far as it goes from where I got. Collecting apples for your pregnant wife is nice, at least. Personal thoughts: I'm not a brony, so I'm not sure how important this would be in the fandom, but right now it's in a fairly rudimentary state. Jumping and speeding up feel a bit too sluggish at the moment, as does the enemy AI. Turning around kills your speed as well, which makes sense but does cause things to drag along quite a bit. I can see the thought put into this, it just needs more time and effort put into it.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

Yo. The character is cut and the musique is nice.
-For the gamplay, wait some time befor you character begin to run is hard. Assigne a run Key can help the player to take enterly the control of your game.
-Duno if it's a bug or not, but i can jump on dark unicorn.
-When i die and click on "Replay" i think the point counter dosent reset. Be cause i can finish the first room without taking all apple.
-When i replay en passed the first room, im stuck out of the screen and i can do nothing.

You have all the honor for have the strenght to offer a game.
Nice work and thank for you game. :)

Developer

Thank you. We appreciate the advice. We will fix those problems ASAP. Except maybe needing to build momentum. That is still somthing we are discussing <3