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A jam submission

Deep BornView game page

An adventur in a dungeon with a women need to avenge and a curse want to live.
Submitted by go-yukkuri — 2 hours, 54 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Gameplay#43.2664.000
Pregnancy Content#63.6744.500
Overall#73.2664.000
Creativity#132.8583.500

Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

  • Not quite what I expected, this game had a engaging story and unique gameplay system. I enjoyed the game quite a bit.
  • Pregnancy content: Even though this borders on "Pregnancy as a punishment", I actually really liked the way this was handled here, both in terms of growth and how it tied into the story. It really reminded my of "Cayne" in terms of talking to your child. I wish there had been a few more visible stages, but it makes sense both in terms of when a pregnant woman would start showing and also because the MC is absolutely STACKED here. Gameplay: It's a puzzle game, but one that mixes up the rules all the time, which was really nice to see. There are some real programming chops here, what with the limited view in the lower levels, traps and even bossfights! The first levels and their rock-paper-scissors mechanic were a bit annoying and there were some oversights here and there, but overall it was enjoyable. Creativity: The story was rather unpredictable, which is really good! I wish the english were a bit more consistent, but that is something that can be fixed pretty quickly to give people a better experience. The twist was unexpected and very welcome, too. Personal thoughts: Definitely one of the biggest surprises this jam in my opinion. I admit, I wasn't expecting much at first but this ended up being one of my personal favorites. I'd be open to going over the dialogue and fixing it up, since that and a few playtesting oversights are really all I can think of in terms of critique. The art is charming, but having someone polish it up would also be nice, though that's more of an afterthought.

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Can't unzip file keeps having an error.

Developer

Re-Re-Re-Re uploaded. lol
If you have any problem dont hesitate to ask.  I will send a mega link directly.
But until Wednesday. So don't hang around too much.

I can't download the game, always gives an extract error every time I try.

Developer

Yo. I tested it and it's work for me. But dont worry. If you can juste wait a little i'm going to upload a news version enterly rewrited.
Let me just 1 or 2 hour and it's good. :D

I cant' touche this first version for the jam. I duno if i can reupload it.
See you later. :)

Developer

It's done. If you have any problem don't hesitate. I will link to another download.

Jam Host

Hello, one of the judges here.

I wanted to ask you if you'd be interested in having the writing in your game looked over and polished at all. This would not count for the jam ratings of course, but I felt like the english was the only real weakness of the game. Since I have some time while I wait for the others to finish their judgements on the games, I figured I'd offer you some help.

Developer

Hello. Of cours. But its not favoritism? We can change the game from the moment we posted it?
If it's ok i ready for all work that need. English is really not mi first langage. ^o^;;;;;

Jam Host

Oh no no, my scores are already set and you would have to upload any new versions separately (Just putting "Non-jam version" in the file name, stuff like that).

If you are interested, contact me on discord as I'd ideally need the decrypted files to change the lines directly in the editor.

Developer

Off cours. But how can i contact you in discord? Or i can send you mine if you want.
(sorry if is not a creation softwar or a game i'm very bad.)

Jam Host

You could join the PreggoPixel's games discord server, where I am head of moderation. I don't want you to be putting your contact info out into the open on here, so that may be the best way to go.

I believe you can find a link to it on the Seeds of Destiny game page here on Itch.

Surprisingly wholesome! I really didn't think the story would turn this way and I was was agreably surprised! 

The art can be somewhat awkward but really expressive, I love her ._. face! XD 

The game mechanics were simple but original and terribly efficient! The first one was really random and long so frustrating and I was glad to change in the next floor but I had never seen it before in a rpg maker game ^^ Having a new mechanic by floors was a really nice touch, it kept the game interesting 'till the end. 

The angels' enigma made me really confused, I must have missed something because it was more trial and error than really understanding what to do. 

I really liked the different endings! All of them had a little something that made me glad to have seen them. The one with the name was so sweet! 

I got a few bugs but nothing bad during the play, more at the end when I was trying for the different endings. 

Developer

Thank very much for this feedback.

If you have any bug dont hesitate to send it to me.

i noted:
-Rework Angel enigma!
-Rework the part after Lord!

Thank you again!