Interesting game! I included it in my Powerpoint Game Jam June, if you’d like to take a look. :)
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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Use of theme | #1 | 4.667 | 4.667 |
Story (optional) | #5 | 3.167 | 3.167 |
Overall | #6 | 3.167 | 3.167 |
Gameplay | #8 | 3.167 | 3.167 |
Comedy (optional) | #8 | 1.500 | 1.500 |
Aesthetic | #11 | 3.333 | 3.333 |
Ranked from 6 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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My feedback hasn't changed much from the last time you submitted this.
You have added more mouse-maze gameplay at the end. But it does take quite a while to get to it. You still have to sit through a lot of "next, next, next" in the beginning. It would be more interesting if the player had some control over what actually happens.
You've got a strong theme and story to work from. I would suggest cutting back on some of the boring parts, and focus on the interactive gameplay elements. Give the player meaningful choices to make, and more challenging tasks to complete.
You have made great progress with this since the last Jam. Well done! The 'Up & Down' squares for the ranger maze were a little too fast for me, so I stopped there after quite a few failures! Hope I didn't miss too much.
Is there a reason why you didn't / couldn't embed the font so it would not have to be downloaded? Just in case you are unaware, you can usually embed it via: File > Options > Save > Check 'Embed fonts in the file' (at the bottom of the box).
hello everybody! since the last PowerPoint game jam, this game has seriously changed, I advise you to play it again, believe me, you will be shocked by the progress of development! ENJOY!
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