Good concept, and good story. The graphics are also not bad, but I would have preferred if you drew them yourself instead of using stock photos. 

Not really much of a "game". More just a series of animations you watch and then click next, next, next. Yeah, there are some multiple-choice questions that pop up, but since there's only 1 correct answer, the outcome never changes. It would be more interesting if the player had some control over what actually happens. For example, what if I could really chose where to land? Or what if there was some challenge to planting vegetables? Letting me decide which order to complete the missions is a nice start (shame there's actually only one mission) and having to complete a mouse-maze to build the rover was a good idea (shame only two levels are completed so far). But there are hints of elements of a good game hidden in here.

You've got a strong theme and story to work from. I would suggest cutting back on some of the boring parts, and focus on the interactive gameplay elements. Give the player meaningful choices to make, and more challenging tasks to complete. 

I look forward to seeing this completed.

Neat concept! I included it in my PowerPoint Game Jam: March compilation video series, if you’d like to take a look. :)

I really love the choice of music and sound effects. I can see the effort in the art although photo-realistic images, cartoon art and basic PowerPoint shapes don't seem to fit together. Maybe a few changes in color, transparency, outline and other shape effects (which can all be done within PowerPoint) can make the shapes look good. Despite this, the demo looks polished. I'm curious what the actual gameplay would be but so far the demo is very interesting.

This game was unfortunately short but I can see it having so much potential in the future as a simulator game. Nicely done!

Graphics - 5/5

Story - 3/5

Gameplay - 4/5

Theme - 1/5