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A jam submission

Right the WrongView game page

Submitted by kirkchild — 1 day, 9 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Theme#6533.0003.000
Cleverness#14712.0002.000
Playability#14862.0002.000
Artistic Style#16552.5002.500

Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

  • While I wouldn't say this game was hard to play by any means, what I can say is that for my experience playing I didn't find a lot of what was presented to be all that compelling. From the aspects of the themes; it felt quite simplistic in the approach, where limited light sources while traversing the forest area is shadow, and having to craft potions in order to do something (wouldn't have fully figured it out unless I read your document). Even with the controls, it felt very cut and dry having to fight enemies and collect items. I'd like to see if this could be expanded upon in some way; maybe with the inclusion of a narrative that would express what the goals of the player character is, or something along those lines. Overall, a fine job putting together everything, whether or not my experience could fully grasp it the way you intended to. Keep up the hard work.
  • I enjoyed petting the dog. Thank you for adding that in the game. 10/10 pet appreciation. The game needs a more refined combat loop. I was finding myself leaving the mouse in a spot and letting the zombies run into it. The art and all that was fine. But I think the alchemy in the game was really lacking as a mechanic. Thank you for your submission. Keep at it!!!

Did you include your Game Design Document as a Google Drive link?
Yes

Seriously... did you include your Game Design Document?
Yes

Is your game set to Public so we can see it?
Yes

Tell us about your game!
Controls also listed in description:
- Move: WASD
- Interact: E
- Burn Active Flower Item: Space
- Throw Active Potion Item: Right Mouse Button
- Need to click item in inventory to make active
There's a cute little pupper
And the table is for the crafting [Alchemy ;)]
Don't let the light die.... They are all around........

Extra Notes
Hope you enjoy!!!!

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Comments

Submitted

I love your thumbnail art, I just had to click. I really enjoyed the fight mechanics, they were pretty unique and satisfying. The movement was responsive and the light mechanic was clever. Plus you can pet the dog! Yay! Great entry.

Developer

thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

Submitted

Great job on the light effects! It took me a minute to realize you could use the torch to attack, and I did go ahead and die pretty quickly. The atmosphere is great!

Developer

Thanks for the feedback!! Yeah I forgot to make mention of it. I'll add a comment in the description for that.

Submitted

Really neat concept! The darkness in the forest felt eerie and I love the lil heart particles on the pupper :3

Developer

Thanks glad you enjoyed it!