You've made a magical soundtrack! I especially like the mood change from a slightly sad orchestration to a dynamic chiptune! And then back from the chiptune to the orchestration!

I liked it! A very creative idea!

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Very good track and interesting ideas, I actually smiled while listening to it, gave me good vibes :D Good job !

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Interesting harmonic development throughout the song, subtle changes in mood between more bitter and sweet sounds. Good vibes and the enhanced chiptune feel of the production adds a nostalgic sheen to it. 

Good things you got going here! I’d love to see the ideas in this get their own track. Perhaps this is the start of something bigger? You have a good sense of where things belong in the sound, and I think that intuition really helps keep the listener locked in!

This is incredible
And I want more of this
Keep that feverish creativity going my man

Nice track, I love how you built the narrative progression into it. It reminds me of something you might hear in a game by Nitrome, very bouncy and chiptuney. Good work!

I listened to this while doing some level design, and I would definitely say it had it's effect!! This was a nice little listen!

Would definitely recommend adding a little more to the page at some point if you get the time.

Compositionally, pretty good! Maybe a little more time to develop as others have mentioned, but a fun listen all the same. Good use of the motif throughout, also. 

I like the 3 act structure of the song but since it's so short they don't get the time to develop as much as they could.