Comments:

This game is a nice idea that sits in the vein of something a little like Papers Please. The player sorts through positive and negative comments about their art. There's a very sincere message the game conveys about the impact of comments on self-esteem. I found it enjoyable to sift through the random comments and find all the strange and wonderful ideas for comments you came up with! 

Feedback:

For replay value, a points system might be helpful for players, so that there is a measure for success other than keeping the ego value positive through a single playthrough. Some of the comments could have been clearer in terms of whether they were positive or negative, as they were a bit strange! 

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Thanks for submitting a game to the ‘One Minute Jam’!

- FSV