@garygreen: thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked it!

Thank for joining in the jam - apologies for taking so long to comment - life got in the way!

I liked the writing in this and the abstract style. The shifts in the presentation style worked well too.

oh thanks! ;)

Very interesting game! I included it in my compilation video of all of the Odyssey Jam games, if you'd like to take a look :)