Love the intro, the keys and the effects on them are ear scratching so it was a nice touch fading them into the track. Mixing could do with some work though, maybe play around with reverb to bring the melody back a little (the melody is great and sometimes it's hard not to push it in front of the mix to let people know how great it is and I know this all too well lol). Other than that, keep rocking. - Amazing stuff! 🤟

Guitar leads have more and bigger intervals, and arpeggios in them. Keep this in mind for the next time you make a guitar lead!
edit: they also have more repeating stuff

It is very well-composed, you can hear that, but I don't truly like the full package. As 'vibing cat' says, it is likely due to the instrument choices. I think, with a slightly different choice of instruments (I'd say, take inspiration from other entries, many use FL and different VST plugins!) you got yourself a banger right here! :D

That said, it is a nice entry for an Anime opening, good job!

Your songs would be 10x better if you choose another guitar sound and made it fit in better. Your leads are generally a bit weird. Once you get that sorted out I'm sure you'll see your music become much better.