I see what you mean about the hasty ending, but I like where you're going with it! It's very emotionally expressive and makes one question their own choices. And a nice use of the text prompt!

Just to make sure i did not miss anything: are there multiple endings? I always end up in a screen with a red phone with a break-up message, no matter what choices i take.  Although, looking back at it now, maybe the cracked screen thing during the game was a clue… Umm.

Interesting! :)