Some seriously open world shenanigans going on here! I liked the format you used to describe each location, perhaps my only suggestion would be to add some situations that players can get thrown into at each of them and then we can take off from there!

I enjoyed the read quite a bit but due to the density of text and size , I thought there wasn't a limit to display font weight but I had toncopy the text and paste it in a word foundry with dark mode to get through the last pages  . Please do a revamped version with clearer hierarchy abd more pages so I can read it without missing out on the sharp spot illustrations!