Highly recommend you upload the game as a .zip so that people can play in a browser - .rar is a pretty big obstacle for most. As for the game itself, a lot of confidence in your framing and slow unravelling of the world, which is hard to do but is pretty successful here. The inkjam theme injections were a bit too obvious, imo, especially since the writing otherwise was capable of connecting it to the theme on its own. Ambitious, in a good way.

This is just the beginning of a larger project, it seems? (No shade, mine is too.) I think there's some very interesting world building going on here and I'd be interested in seeing more of it. But I don't think just sitting us down and telling us the world-building is a very effective way to communicate it, and the dialogue isn't always very smooth. I'd like to see this world explored in a more active way.