Hello!

A friend and I played your game today, and we were both very charmed by it. I have the feeling you are quite new to RPGmaker, but I can tell a lot of effort was put into this project. Congrats on submitting it!

Here are some things to keep in mind should you do more with this game or move onto another RPGmaker game.

Due to the fact that there were no reliable healing points, we ended up unable to beat this game.  Our main character died in the fight with the guard and Marina ended up very hurt as well - so we couldn't fight any more battles. I would consider putting a healing point of some sort somewhere. (I thought perhaps the buckets in town would heal me like that bucket in the dream world, but they didn't :< ) The only way to heal that I found was buying potions, but because combat is rather plain, grinding for money to buy potions is undesirable.

I picked to play as a mage, however was never given any magic. The mage MC wasn't very useful in battle since he couldn't damage boss enemies with regular attacks. It seemed the only way to learn spells was to buy them at an incredibly high price. Again, relying on the player to dedicate that much time to grinding isn't very realistic.

Those are my two biggest complaints. This game was very rough around the edges, but I truly do admire your dedication. I love the colourful "you received [x] experience" screens. I love the clipboard quest screen. Marina laughing at inappropriate times made me laugh.

Thank you for sharing your game and I hope you continue to grow with the program. : )